Please note that this blog has adult interactions and if you are under the age of 16 please make sure a parent or guardian is aware that you are reading this. Also I'm not going to be writing the blog from Violet's eyes but threw a 3rd party so that it flows more like a story. Thank you for bearing with me and this change of format.
Katie slept peacefully knowing that her first day of high school was vastly approaching and so where the results from Cheerleading tryouts. Katie is 100% girly girl and being a cheerleader would be the most amazing thing that could happen to her in high school. When her alarm went off she knew that she needed to help get the younger siblings ready for the day.
"Oh my Felicia I think you grew over night!" Katie stated as she brought in her not so baby sister into the living room. The house was changing and for the good.
"ok Flora... you can do it..." Karni coached Flora while trying to walk. Flora was more interested in talking than walking. "pretty shapes Karn!" Flora said while pointing to her pajamas. Karni stayed focoused on the task at hand. "Flora come to..." but before she could finish young Flora yelled out MAMA!!! The walking session was done for the moment.
Boys tend to develop slower than girls and the twins (Brock and Brogan) where no exception to the statistics. Violet monitored them as they each gained 1 more skill. 5 toddler's in the house made for a busy house. Violet started to picture the boys as children wondering what they would develop into. She adored Brogan's blond and pink hair and Brock's classic charming smile. She began to remember how much she loved having little men running around the house.
The kitchen timer that Violet has to help remind the school kids what time they had to leave for school made Felicia mad. It let her know that her big sister's where off to school and she was going to miss them. mainly Katie her morning helper. "Bye, bye Katie." she said while starting to cry and waving.
Karni was pulling off the Gothic look like she had been doing it for years. She loved standing out and with looking so much like her twin sister Katie it was an easy way to keep them separated. But they are still each other's best friend and if you mess with one you mess with BOTH.
When Katie and Karni's bus pulled up it was no surprise that the 3 top snobs who happen to be cheerleaders where already there keeping an eye on things. Mia Frayl (far left) is the nicest one out of the bunch but acts mean so that Elaine and Jainie won't boot her off the squad. Janie Frink (middle) is the good girl who avoids confrontation but will push your buttons till you do something stupid. And the Queen Bee herself Elaine Bonder (right side) She is captain, strait A student, super nice to your face but DEADLY behind you back. There was a rumor going on around town that she and one of the football players woo hooed on the football field. Every one swears its true and she will work her words around an answer with out answering. Her most common response is "Yeah I heard that too... I think it sounds like FUN!" Who know's what that means.
"Oh look Jainie, looks like death decided to throw up all over Sue," Laughed Elaine as Karni's best friend walked by. "ha ha ha (sarcastic) I'm sorry you couldn't come up with a new insult. You used that one last week." Sue responded to Elaine while walking away.
Sue met up with Karni and started to complain about Elaine. All the "lower class" students didn't understand how a girl like Elaine could get a guy as great as Kaiden Keebler. He is one of the best football players and NOT the one who was rumored to be woo hooing on the football field. "Look at them. How can she get EVERYTHING and I get stuck with crappy foster parents and sharing a room with a 7 year old who wets the bed?" Sue added to her death glare on Elaine embracing Kaiden. "Some girls appear to have it all when they really don't. Sue don't beat yourself up she's not worth it." Karni said after closing her locker door. The bell rang and all students got to class. The school day was pretty normal until the new cheerleaders where listed and Katie's name wasn't on it.
Jainie and Mia gossiped about how crazy Katie must have been thinking SHE would be a cheerleader. "She's so ugly and her hair color would CLASH with the uniforms. We want people to enjoy the game not be distracted and leave because of the ugly cheerleader." Jainie Whispered to Mia. Mia added "I KNOW She's like... YUCK right?" "TOTALLY." Jainie giggled.
Katie approached the listings and saw that there where no new recruits after 2 hours of practice and 10 girls tried out. "Is this some mistake Lain?" asked Katie in a confused tone. "ok so first of all only my friends call me Lain and 2 nope there is no mistake you suck and I rock." Elaine stated with Mia watching closely. "Well why put us there 2 hours non stop of drills just to know that no one is going to be good enough?" Well my little purple puck bucket its because we, and when I say we I mean us cheerleaders, we enjoy watching all you freaks act like idiots trying to be like us, and when I say us I mean us-" "Cheerleaders?" interrupted Katie.
Karni over heard the conversation and was appalled by how her sister was treated. She avoided the trio of trouble and headed home. Katie didn't complain about not making the squad but she did get upset with the comments said. They weren't just hurtful they where beyond anything that she had ever heard said about anyone before. The words puck bucket stuck out the most. She walked the long way home trying to avoid contact with anyone. Karni knew that there was no way Elaine would get away with talking to Katie like that.
Then the girls got home they where both shocked to see older even cuter brothers. They where enjoy not having school because Violet didn't have time to register them with taking care of the triplets. Who where all toddling around the house at this point.
Felicia, Francine, and Flora where just as cute as the other sets of triplets that have been brought into the Newbie house. Violet called her photographer over to take pictures for her. Not only does she have a handler, manager, and therapist she now also has a photographer who is on call 24/7 for her photography needs.
The F triplets all enjoyed hanging out and playing in their pj's and patching blocks. They all three made up a game that they close their eyes, pick up a block count to 3 and then they open their eyes. If your block matched one of your sister's you got a coin. They play with pretend coins and collect the different colors. Violet bought them at a garage sale. They all picked up a green block and giggled. Francine then said "I'm so perfect." Flora responded with "Me too!" Felicia then dropped her block and covered her eyes. "1, 2, 3 OPEN!" she then opened to see that they all had blue blocks. The laughter coming form the playroom was the sweetest sound. Violet enjoyed the moment as she watched from the doorway.
"Hey Karn can I stay the night? I'm like totally not liking my foster dad right now. He's like being all stupid and stuff saying that me having my own room gives me more space to clutter up in his house. Can you believe that?" Sue confided in Karni."Don't let it bother you he's only thinking about the money the government gives them for taking in you and the other foster kids. He's selfish and you are almost 18 and we will find a place together here or somewhere else and chill till we get boyfriends then split but still be besties!" Karni said knowing just what to say to make Sue feel better. But Karni didn't lie both girls plan to move out and live together for awhile after high school. They might even travel the world they just don't want to not be friends.
Isaiah went over to Joe's house to visit and wasn't at school. This was surprising to Karni and Katie but they had drama to deal with at school so they didn't realize she wasn't there till it was to late. "Mom, why wasn't Isaiah at school today?" asked Katie while texting her boyfriend. "Well she went over to see Joe and he decided that she was mature enough to move out on her own. She is 19 and he felt it was time for her to move on to better things." responded Violet. The thought of having Isaiah out of the house was hard for Violet to handle and to make matters worse she didn't even get to say bye. Isaiah was already in France visiting Joe's parents who vacation there often.
Katie was happy when Billy (her boyfriend) surprised her with a visit. "You have no idea how much I've missed you beautiful." "And you will never know ho much I've missed YOU handsome!" The two started kissing when a mother clearing her throat interrupted the two love birds. "Ok well I'm off to meet Ashby. She's a little worried about Derrick and Sall but I will be back soon so don't do anything that a teenager shouldn't be doing." Violet said before walking out the door.
Ashby- Violet I'm worried about Sally. Derrick says that she's quiet and mopes around the house all the time. She hasn't even bothered to go to her OBGYN to see if there is something she can do to help her conceive. Violet- Oh no... They truly had everything and now its as if their whole world is crashing down on them.
Ashby- I don't know what to do. Derrick has never called me so many times in a day I can't focus on anything but him. I felt that maybe if we talked face to face it would help him but I still don't know what to say.
Violet- Just letting him know that you are there for him is enough and Sall will be ok. I know that this is a shock to her because its not like it runs in my family. It must be maybe something she inherited form Jessip?
Ashby- Can it be inherited?Violet- Well you see I don't really know. -rubs head- You want to get something to eat?
Ashby- YES! I'm starving and good company is a plus
The two friends went into the diner and discussed their children's situation. The two of them where so happy to be joined with a bond that was given to them when their kids married but also their friendship that blossomed way before Derrick and Sally where even thought of.
Violet and Ashby said their see you later's and headed back home. Ashby decided to visit Derrick and Asher while in town. Violet was eager to get back home and see what the kids where up to. She had been gone longer than she expected.
After getting all of the kids tucked away into bed Violet decided to go threw Isaiah's old stuff and see what things needed mended to be given to goodwill. While collecting items she stumbled across a letter. Violet hesitated to touch it thinking it might be form a boy or even from Joe and Violet felt that it wasn't her business till she picked it up and a smaller not fell out. TWO notes? how odd of her to be hiding notes from me, she thought now looking at what the notes said. The bigger letter was her list of goals and dreams. But the smaller one was much more disturbing...
SHE WILL HAVE A BABY
AND THAT BABY IS MINE
Violet dropped the note and didn't hesitate to call Isaiah. What trouble was she in? Who wrote this? and how long has she had it? Where just a few of the questions running threw her mind as her hands where shaking while dialing. but her phone went straight to voice mail. Violet left a message and went to bed.
Violet woke up early the next day with a to do list that would make any single mom of 8 go WHAT WAS I Thinking? But all would be good in time. Feeling inspired she designed a new top and was eager put it into real life from like the boots she sketched earlier. She hung the picture up and headed down stairs to work on breakfast.
She made apple pancakes and right when she was about to serve her phone rang and it was Isaiah. She felt bad that she hid the note from Violet but she was scared after what Zekayla told her Jaidalynn in the graveyard. All this information made Vi's head spin but she managed to get all the information. Isaiah apologized and promised she wouldn't hide anything like that from her mom again. Violet then went to call Zekayla but nothing. It went straight to a voicemail that said the number was out of service. Violet found this odd, whenever her kids move or change a phone number she usually is notified but this time NOTHING. Just then the door bell rang.
Vincent was an old friend of Violet and a detective. He was already in the house searching for something. Violet found him in Isaiah's room. "Well hello there Vincent. I wasn't expecting you but I'm happy your here. I can't get a hold of Zekayla." Violet told him with concern. Vincent was quick to reply "You know your not the first person to notice that. Her boyfriend Brent was worried she didn't come home last night." He continued to look around for clues. Just then he got an e-mail (on his phone) that someone thought they saw Zekayla and they would have more information on the lead soon. Vincent looked at Violet and asked "You know what we can do to pass the time?" Violet could care less at the moment she just wanted to know if her daughter was ok. But having another baby would be great so she agreed.
Back at the school more cheerleader trouble was brewing and this time Karni had, had enough. "How dare you treat someone like that? You have no right to tell anyone they are worthless." with that said Karni took matter's into her own hands.
A fight broke out in the school hallway and several students took note. Karni defended her sister knowing that the chances of her getting suspended would be more than likely but so would Elaine and that made it all the better. The fight didn't take long and it left Elaine flat on her butt. Karni threw Elaine's hair clip at her and said "DON'T mess with a Newbie EVER again or you will answer to ME!"
Mrs. Vrint walked in and saw that the fight was over after one of the students told her that it was taking place. Both Elaine and Karni said that it was a miss understanding and Elaine admitted to picking no new cheerleaders for the squad. Mrs. Vrint asked that she add at least someone to the group since they where down 2 because they graduated. After 3rd period Jainie, Mia, and Elaine decided only one girl was good enough for the squad and they put her uniform in her locker (with help form the girls sister) to surprise her with the news.
Katie was overjoyed with the news that she made the squad and put on her uniform right way. She was so happy that they saw her for her true potential and all 3 of the girls admitted that she had the best form for a cheerleader.
Colby knew to much and she knew that Joe was up to something but she couldn't put her finger on what. She left quickly after giving Stephanie a good bye hug and kiss. Kellae tried to run after her but it was to late. Colby was gone and this made things between Joe and Kellae worse. Joe then went back to the hidden room where he was hiding one of Violet's daughters. He drugged her and had his way with her. He was going to have a son weather it be with her, Kellae, OR Violet.
Joe left his victim motionless and went into a connecting room that was also secret. He then looked at the pictures he has been taking of Violet. "Violet your either pregnant or not alone but believe me I WILL have a son with you or your daughter before I'm done with you." He said laughing. He left the room quickly before anyone spotted him missing. Asher was confused at Joe constantly disappearing and was also surprised that Colby left without saying good bye. Asher's not stupid and began keeping a close eye on Joe.
Violet felt bad that the younger kids where not able to do much at the party so she planned a late night PRIVATE sprinkler party for the kids. She quickly fixed her computer monitor so that in case Zekayla needed to get a hold of her.
Since Katie was at a sleep over it was up to Violet and Karni to get all the kids ready for the sprinkler. It wasn't easy getting 3 excited toddler's into swimsuits but eventually they where all dress and outside having a blast.
The picture is dark but Brogan did the best he could in taking the picture He wasn't happy that his trunks shrunk and so he was wearing his underwear as a swim suit. He was more than happy to take the picture than be in the picture. Violet helped the tots have a good time and Karni was constantly texting with Katie with what was going on and Katie was texting what was going on too.
After a half hour of fire pit stories Violet decided it was time for everyone to head strait to bed. After all of the kids where tucked away she sat admiring her work. She thought of ways to put her sketches into the real thing. Violet was really enjoying designing and knew that this was a passion that wasn't going away any time soon.
Before heading off to bed Violet quickly planted the seed she found awhile ago. She liked the idea of having another vegetable garden around. And soon it would be FULL of fruits and vegetables that needed harvested. Just about passing out Violet headed up to bed. Thoughts of the baby arriving tomorrow got her thinking about names, gender's, and how exciting life was going to get again with a baby. With Felicia, Francine, and Flora walking, talking, and potty trained it makes reality hit hard that the "babies" of the house are no longer babies.
The morning of Violet's Due date was here. She was lazy today and decided to keep her pj's on for a little longer. "oh the joy of motherhood," Violet told herself while emptying out the potty chairs. She worked on dishes, laundry, and hardly saw Karni, Katie, Brock, or Brogan this morning. She figured they where all sleeping in because of the late night they all had. It was a great time and Violet hopes to have more family activities/outings in the future. She headed to the couch to relax.
The baby started to enter the world. She started to laugh at the impatient little one who couldn't wait to make his/her grand entrance. Violet then caught her...
She made apple pancakes and right when she was about to serve her phone rang and it was Isaiah. She felt bad that she hid the note from Violet but she was scared after what Zekayla told her Jaidalynn in the graveyard. All this information made Vi's head spin but she managed to get all the information. Isaiah apologized and promised she wouldn't hide anything like that from her mom again. Violet then went to call Zekayla but nothing. It went straight to a voicemail that said the number was out of service. Violet found this odd, whenever her kids move or change a phone number she usually is notified but this time NOTHING. Just then the door bell rang.
Vincent was an old friend of Violet and a detective. He was already in the house searching for something. Violet found him in Isaiah's room. "Well hello there Vincent. I wasn't expecting you but I'm happy your here. I can't get a hold of Zekayla." Violet told him with concern. Vincent was quick to reply "You know your not the first person to notice that. Her boyfriend Brent was worried she didn't come home last night." He continued to look around for clues. Just then he got an e-mail (on his phone) that someone thought they saw Zekayla and they would have more information on the lead soon. Vincent looked at Violet and asked "You know what we can do to pass the time?" Violet could care less at the moment she just wanted to know if her daughter was ok. But having another baby would be great so she agreed.
Back at the school more cheerleader trouble was brewing and this time Karni had, had enough. "How dare you treat someone like that? You have no right to tell anyone they are worthless." with that said Karni took matter's into her own hands.
A fight broke out in the school hallway and several students took note. Karni defended her sister knowing that the chances of her getting suspended would be more than likely but so would Elaine and that made it all the better. The fight didn't take long and it left Elaine flat on her butt. Karni threw Elaine's hair clip at her and said "DON'T mess with a Newbie EVER again or you will answer to ME!"
Mrs. Vrint walked in and saw that the fight was over after one of the students told her that it was taking place. Both Elaine and Karni said that it was a miss understanding and Elaine admitted to picking no new cheerleaders for the squad. Mrs. Vrint asked that she add at least someone to the group since they where down 2 because they graduated. After 3rd period Jainie, Mia, and Elaine decided only one girl was good enough for the squad and they put her uniform in her locker (with help form the girls sister) to surprise her with the news.
Katie was overjoyed with the news that she made the squad and put on her uniform right way. She was so happy that they saw her for her true potential and all 3 of the girls admitted that she had the best form for a cheerleader.
Karni was so happy for her twin sister Katie she got all 4 girls together for a group picture. It was a great moment and the only other person Katie wanted to celebrate it with was her loving and supportive boyfriend Billy. But Billy wasn't having such a great day. While in lab his mix of chemicals reacted badly and well he had to get his clothes washed ASAP.
Billy did slip out of the wash room that the lab had put in last year to big Katie a quick congratulations. But Karni got to see the reaction on his face when he saw his beautiful girlfriend sporting her cheerleader outfit proudly. They kissed quickly before the bell rang. All high students got out early due to the football game that was going on tonight. So the teenager's in the house went out with friends to get ready for the big school dance and the kids went home to do chores.
Brock was never one to complain about a few household chores but when his brother is no where to be found. He tends to get a little irritated but oh well. At least HE gets his allowance for the week.
Out of no where Karni and Brogan showed up. They all headed out to the pool knowing that Violet had invited a few people over for a get together. Vincent never got word while with Violet about Zekayla and headed back to the station so he was ready with the information did come in.
LOTS of people showed up and they where all gossiping about several different things. Violet was to busy running around to focus on one conversation or another. But that was about to change.
Isaiah pulled her mom aside and explained where Zekayla was. "Mom you will never believe this but Zekayla is starring in a MAJOR movie. Her producer didn't give her but 3 minutes to get her stuff together and leave. She is in China and that's where Jaelia and Jaidalynn saw her and then called the station because you where looking for her." Isaiah went on to explain that her phone was shut down because of everyone having her number they where all contacting her and making it hard for her to work. But she's 100% ok and sends her love. Violet hugged Isaiah and was feeling much better. Soon after Isaiah gave Violet the scoop Vincent texted her with "I have great new!" Violet texted back with I know what your going to tell me THANKS!"
Feeling the baby kick just added to the amazing moment of finding out that Zekayla was ok and fulfilling her dream of being an actress. The party was a blast and everyone who attended was happy to be there. OH and the dance was great too. The girls where embarrassed and wanted Violet to keep all photo's to herself... SO she's going to honor their wishes but WOW the girls looked amazing. but across the street Joe and Kellae where up to no good.
Joe has been longing for a son and has been jealous that Violet gets everything she wants (that's not entirely true) but Joe likes to think so. He took one of Violet's daughter's and his holding her captive. "I have a plan for you beautiful." He said to the motionless body laying in bed unaware of where she was or who had her.
Kellae wasn't happy with Joe's plan at all. "Are you seriously asking me if it's ok that you cheat?" Kellae asked Joe in a surprised and discussed tone. "Kellae come on its not like I love the girl I just want my boy. If you could give me one I wouldn't have to sleep with other girls. You put this on yourself." Joe said passing the blame onto Kellae.
Colby accidentally over heard and tried to run away before Joe caught her standing by her parents bedroom door but Joe came out in a rage. "You sneaky little witch. How DARE you spy on your mother and I." Joe yelled at Colby. "What are you going to do? Who where you talking about? Dad I'm going to the cops." Colby threated her steaming dad as if she could stop him.
Colby was STUNNED when her her dad (Joe) slapped her. He told her to get out of the house and to come back when she knew how to respect him. Colby held back the tears as her father hit her. He was always so gentle and kind to her. This was nothing like him and it broke her heart to leave her sister behind. But she knew that leaving was maybe best. Colby knew to much and she knew that Joe was up to something but she couldn't put her finger on what. She left quickly after giving Stephanie a good bye hug and kiss. Kellae tried to run after her but it was to late. Colby was gone and this made things between Joe and Kellae worse. Joe then went back to the hidden room where he was hiding one of Violet's daughters. He drugged her and had his way with her. He was going to have a son weather it be with her, Kellae, OR Violet.
Joe left his victim motionless and went into a connecting room that was also secret. He then looked at the pictures he has been taking of Violet. "Violet your either pregnant or not alone but believe me I WILL have a son with you or your daughter before I'm done with you." He said laughing. He left the room quickly before anyone spotted him missing. Asher was confused at Joe constantly disappearing and was also surprised that Colby left without saying good bye. Asher's not stupid and began keeping a close eye on Joe.
Violet felt bad that the younger kids where not able to do much at the party so she planned a late night PRIVATE sprinkler party for the kids. She quickly fixed her computer monitor so that in case Zekayla needed to get a hold of her.
Since Katie was at a sleep over it was up to Violet and Karni to get all the kids ready for the sprinkler. It wasn't easy getting 3 excited toddler's into swimsuits but eventually they where all dress and outside having a blast.
The picture is dark but Brogan did the best he could in taking the picture He wasn't happy that his trunks shrunk and so he was wearing his underwear as a swim suit. He was more than happy to take the picture than be in the picture. Violet helped the tots have a good time and Karni was constantly texting with Katie with what was going on and Katie was texting what was going on too.
After a half hour of fire pit stories Violet decided it was time for everyone to head strait to bed. After all of the kids where tucked away she sat admiring her work. She thought of ways to put her sketches into the real thing. Violet was really enjoying designing and knew that this was a passion that wasn't going away any time soon.
Before heading off to bed Violet quickly planted the seed she found awhile ago. She liked the idea of having another vegetable garden around. And soon it would be FULL of fruits and vegetables that needed harvested. Just about passing out Violet headed up to bed. Thoughts of the baby arriving tomorrow got her thinking about names, gender's, and how exciting life was going to get again with a baby. With Felicia, Francine, and Flora walking, talking, and potty trained it makes reality hit hard that the "babies" of the house are no longer babies.
The morning of Violet's Due date was here. She was lazy today and decided to keep her pj's on for a little longer. "oh the joy of motherhood," Violet told herself while emptying out the potty chairs. She worked on dishes, laundry, and hardly saw Karni, Katie, Brock, or Brogan this morning. She figured they where all sleeping in because of the late night they all had. It was a great time and Violet hopes to have more family activities/outings in the future. She headed to the couch to relax.
There was no time to rest the baby was coming. Violet handled the first few with no problems but then they really started to come. She was pushing as hard as she could and then felt a POP.
She had never felt anything like this and it made her confused. She stood for a moment and then froze but the baby didn't. Without a single push...
BABY BOY!
Tramon Jordy Newbie
7lb 12oz 20 1/4 inches
Violet was quite pleased with the outcome of the family photo. And knowing that Isaiah was also visiting when the picture was taken made it even more special. Violet's photographer took several different shots but this was by far the best one! Tramon was a peaceful baby. He was quite content and ate 2oz for his first feeding. Having another little boy in the house made everyone very happy.
The family was gathered together and introducing themselves to Tramon when Violet's phone rang with an unfamiliar #. Hesitating a a slow h little Violet answered withello. "Mom I'm lost... I'm scared... I have no idea how to get home..." a quivering voice said along with a loud thud Violet was quick to reply "who is this?" "Mom its me Sally." CLICK the phone was down. Violet tried to call back but NOTHING. Violet's head started to spin when asking herself questions. Sally's lost? Is she pregnant? Was that letter about her? Violet got a hold of Vincent and told him she needed him RIGHT AWAY.
Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it. I hope your not to confused that I'm no longer blogging in Violet's eyes to help the story flow. I appreciate all of you who read my blog and leave comments via Facebook, twitter, here on the blog, e-mail, or on my forum. You make blogging about Violet even more fun! I wanted to tell you that I have a poll at the top of my blog. Since I'm now to baby 66 I wanted to start thinking of what to do next and wanted YOUR HELP! So please vote for what challenge you would like to see me do next. Also positive and negative feedback is always welcome but to a point if you have a comment of something you would like me to improve PLEASE message me via Facebook (Violet Jane Newbie) not Violet Newbie that's someone else. ALSO I would like to thank all of the other people who use Violet, Violet's children, or my other sims in your blogs. That means so much to me! THANK YOU SO MUCH and I hope to not leave you hanging for to long. HAPPY SIMMING~
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wow I love your blog it's a great story and i hope to hear more i found your blog on the sims 3 wall i am kinda new to sims 3 so it cool to see what other people do.
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Okay First Of All: Joe Is A FREAK!! I think he Had to Much Crazy In his Breakfast :P Next: AWESOME Post The Whole Cheerleader Fight thing was SO COOL!!! I'm Excited to See Whats Going On with Della O_O SPOOKY! Anyway Like I said this Post was AMAZING! :)
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I couldn't say it better than u della :P
ReplyDeleteI never liked Joe...and I never will.
ReplyDeleteGo Packer Baby! lol
Alright, Joe is either:
ReplyDeleteA. Insane
B. Crazy
C. A Dou***
D. All of the above.
Thanks for the comments! and smiggle.catapillar I always love when new people read my blog! I hope you all like what's coming next it will take some time but hopefully it will be out soon.
ReplyDeleteI've been reading your blog for a while but this is my first comment :D
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post! I loved the cheerleader part and I like to learn about Joe's "mental instability."
I think it was weird how you switched to third person though. I liked it the other way better. (No offense, I'm just giving my two cents.)
i loved it!! :)
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VMKPirateGirl- Thanks for your comments and honesty. I was told by several people that the other way was more confusing so that's why I changed. Thank you for reading I LOVE getting comments and your opinion matters to me :)
ReplyDeleteLannaKin- Thank you
OMG! BEST POST SO FAR!!! :D
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